Elijah Carver

Name: Elijah Jonas Carver

Age: 15

House: Gryffindor

Family: Maria Carver (Mother), Hank Carver (Father), Elizabeth Carver (Sister; a little less than a year younger than Eli, so that they are in the same year at school.)

Year in school: 4th

Brief History: Maria and Hank met at the Auror academy (for those who don't know, that's the police and army in one.) Maria was a criminal psychologist, and Hank a field operative. They married and had Eli and Ellie soon after. The two picked up a lot of skills from there parents. They lived in Cardiff. As primary schoolers (American equivalent is elementary) they made great friends with a squib child whose whole family were squibs. That child's older brother is a high ranking government official. The three were terribly unhappy about having to leave each other, when Eli and Ellie left for Hogwarts. At school, Eli and Ellie made chasers on the Gryffindor quidditch team in their second year because of how well they work together, although they have a hard time including the third chaser sometimes. Eli is a respected duelist who will fight anyone gladly, (with good reason) occasionally with his fists.

Physical Appearance: Tall, with black hair. He keeps his hair short and it naturally stands up a bit in the front. Eli is muscular from training with his father. He has turquoise eyes and a scar the shape of a crescent moon on his forehead from fighting a kid who had a ring.

Personality: He believes wrong-doers should be punished. And he distributes that punishment swiftly, whether it be in his power to or not. He always tries to help the underdogs. He's a very vocal leader in helping others or improving circumstances. Eli is a bit serious, rarely appreciates jokes.

Talents: A tiger Animagus.

Wand: 13" Elm. Hippogriff feather core. The Carvers are from an old line of Hippogriff grooms and have traditionally taken their feathers as cores in the wands that they made for themselves.

Other: Pet koala named Ike.

Patronus: Mastiff.

Very creative name for the sister xD. I'm guessing this is a WIP?

Yeah, I don't have time to finish it cause I have class in five minutes.

How does that look?

Looks good. Also we should probably include when they have a rare wand to put how they got it.

Excellent idea.

Such as mine xD Family heirloom all the way.

Me too.

I'd suggest a longer history?

As usual. I think that the history may not be quite as important and I may invoke admin powers on this issue.

2 mods= 1 admin fix it!!!

Well didn't you even expect it slightly?

Of course I did, silly.

But really tell about the life before Hogwarts, some things that happened during like say a fist fight.

Actually, you're right. I agree about the life before Hogwarts bit. But the History is mainly used as a skeleton outline of the person's life, for understanding of the rest of the app.

But you're also the creator of the site/ an admin which should put you as an example. :p Fix it dude.

By HBV standards, I might be lacking. However this is also a different site, which emphasizes the history a bit less. But yeah, I'm adding some stuff.

You are going to be held to higher standards and people will look off of this character sheet and say woah I'm taking orders from that guy? Happened to me once had to step done to modship and work my way back up. So sorry if I'm coming off as a jerk.

Sure. I get where you're coming from. And thanks for the advice.

So, I added some stuff.

Don't see any difference though the bio looks bigger....

So, any suggestions?

Nah it's fine just go ahead and start rping.